We have learnt so much during Health Week and all have a much better understanding of why it is important to make sensible decisions about our lifestyle to stay fit and healthy. From learning about how the human heart works, the dangers of smoking, what vandalism is and the effect it can have and why we must always stay away from illegal drugs, it really has been an action-packed few days in the Upper Juniors!
We were all inspired by the Human Heart rap which we listened to in Science (see below on the blog to watch it again!) and many of us had a go at writing a few lines at the end of our anti-smoking fact sheets in English.
Your homework this week is to write your own Health Week Rap and post it on the blog! You could choose to rap about all of our learning, or you may want to focus on one particular area.
Here’s an example (created by a group of Year 6 pupils)ย to get your creative juices flowing:
Don’t be a fool
Don’t be mad
If you light a ciggie
Your teeth’ll go bad!
Your hair’ll stink
Your skin’ll go grey
Your lungs’ll fill with tar
And your life’ll fade away!
They hung in packs
One goal one purpose
To see you sad is what makes them glad
They are the rain and you are a metal fence
You let them get to you, and you will rust
But with your shield, your heart,
They have no effect
Be brave, be strong,
They have the flaw not you
Theyโre jealous
They get pleasure from your grief,
And, soon, they will move on
Don’t light a ciggie
That’s not biggy
Your lungs will fill with tar
And then you’ll go to the bar
Your heart will slow
So then you will blow
If you have a ciggie at the bay
Your life will slowly fade away
Dont light a fag.
Your teath will go bad.
Your teath will go yellow.
And your lungs will go black .
Your heart will slow .
Your life will blow .
If you have a ciggie every day.
You will fade away.
Stop vandalism
Its the worst thing in the world
If you do this thing
The world will turn
If you do this it wont fade away
But if you do this everywhere will fade away
Drugs, drugs the worst thing in the world
If you do this you will be the badist
If you have it, if you do it
Your the madist!
Love them so far Team Trim!
If you light a fag your teeth will turn bad
your lungs will fill with tar
and you’ll sound like a rusty old car
so dont be like the rest
be the best
or your life will fade away
you’re health will go down the pan
if you don’t get an exercise plan
get off the couch
don’t slouch
Get on your bike
take a hike
move your body
netball, rugby,football,swiming
it’s not all about the winning
it’s the taking part
thats good for your heart.
Wow, Team Trim!
Your raps are great!!!!
Well done!
Team, these are absolutely superb! I really like the way so many of you have made sure you are giving a clear message and I am delighted to see so many lines with a similar number of syllables and rhyming words.
Well done Team Trim
These are truly neat
Keep on rapping
Your words sound sweet
I’m loving the lyrics
And the hip hop rhyme
We’ll rap these in class
And, have a wicked time
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Can’t wait to see some more!
Wow they are phenomenal and well done Miss Trim!
Great rapping Team Trim! One of the things I love about the Hordle Blog is the way in which we get to share everybody’s super work – usually I don’t get to read what other classes do for their homework. I think the Easi-Speaks will be needed next week to get some of these raps recorded!!
Dont be a fool smokings not cool
smoking is mad and also bad
you wont be hethey or welthy
dont smoke your start to choke so stop
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Smoking
Don`t be a fool.
Be cool .
Don`t liight a ciggie.
Its no biggy.
Healthy eating.
If you don`t eat your five a day.
Your mum will say.
Your not on a healthy diet.
And for goodness sake eat quiet.
Vandalsm
They ruin everything.
They smash your windows.
Don`t be afraid.
Stand up to them.
Dont light a fag your teeth will go bad,
your heart will stink,
your teeth will go bad,
your friends will leave,
your girl friend too,
so the message is simple DONT SMOKE
Drugs are the worst,
they can help,
but illegal ones wont,
they make you feel ill
then you’ll have to go to hospitle
if you’ve had a stroke then I’d listen up
what you’ve gota do is regular exersise like:swiming, running and yoga
dyou know smoking is the most likley to cause a stroke so are drugs
the punch line is dont smoke or consume drugs(illegal drugs at least)
If you smoke,
You are a big joke ,
You learn it from school ,
Trust me smoking is not cool,
Dont listen to the rest ,
Its your body and you are the best ,
Dont let your life fade away!!!,
Smoking is bad
Smoking is sad
It costs lots of money,
it does not make you look like a honey;
Its fills your lungs up with tar,
if you smoke your stupid HA HA HA!
Don’t take a ciggie
you will look like a piggy
ya lungs will fill with tar
and will look like a chocolate bar
ya teeth will go yellow
now you can’t bellow
ya get heart disease
ya get lung disease
so don’t smoke
cos its a joke
Well Done Team Trim you showed real risk taker abilities
Dont smoke twenty times a day
or it will make your skin go grey
your fingers will go yella
your teeth will fall out
and all will say look at that fella
your breath will stink of smoke
and your clothes will too
so dont smoke twenty times a day
or your life will fade away.
Dont be a fool,
Dont light up,
Its not cool,
You stupid mup………..pet.
It costs a lot,
Its cool you will think,
Its just stupid,
And you will stink…stink…pink.
Your teath will fall out,
Your breath will smell,
You wont get a kiss,
And you will go to hell !!!!
Harvey, I have reposted your rap homework here because you accidentally put in under another post and I would not want Miss Trim to miss it!
Hey everybody take a look at me I have a heart inside of me
to keep it ticking good and strong I skip and I jump and hurry along
to keep it healthy I eat five a day
these are the rules that I obey!
I need the blood inside my veins
to help me as I engage my brains!!!
So if a healthy heart is what your after
there’s one more thing and that is laughter!
By Harvey B
Anti Vandalism
Dont be a crinimal
Nor be the no1 dumminal
you’ll end up behing behind iron bars !
In prison secured !
Graffiti,smashing windows with rocks ,sitting on your locals walls what else could you do?
You’ll be the villagers target!
So dont be crinimal or a dumminal!
Be normal!
Like everyone else!
If you start a smoke
Your life will dessolve
To stay away
Is is the way to resolve
Stick with me
My life is dearly
If you go to smoking
you’ll die early!!
Dont smoke its not cool,
you’ll end up in a Hospital,
If you smoke, you’ll be a joke
If you don’t you’ll be the number 1 folk.
So listen to the doctors, don’t smoke its bad
otherwise you’ll end up sad
Doctors rule, they know what to do.
if you don’t want to drown in a fag swimming pool
Your mates ain’t cool
if they smoke at school
So one more time i say to you
Do not smoke it’s so not cool
you’ll end up in a hospital
Make it simple
DON’T SMOKE!
Cool stuff guys. Good work!
Anti-Smoking Rap!
Now if I smoke
As you should know
I throw my life right out the window
I won’t be able to run or climb
Cuz Ill be coughing all the time
Friends say it makes you look cool
It makes you look rad
But they don’t tell you why it’s bad
It will rot out your teeth
And ruin your lungs
And it can lead to other drugs
Not to mention gives you nasty breath
And the smoke smells worse than my pet skunk, Seth
These and more are reasons not to light up
So be smart and say ENOUGH!!!!:)
My heart keeps me moving,
moving and grooving,
pumps the blood to all the parts,
thats the function of my heart.
Doing lots of exercise keeps me fit,
eating healthy does it’s bit,
staying away from drugs is the best way,
all of this makes sure my heart doesn’t pay.
now pay close attention to what i have said,
dont be stupid you will end up dead,
dont you think your heart deserves some respect?
for keeping you alive? yeah show it respect.
Awesome rapping Team Trim!!!
Always say no to nicotine
it’s not cool and it’s not clever.
Only the mad will have a fag
If you wanna smoke you won’t be a good bloke.
Your lungs will go black
you’ll have nasty breath and you will have an early death!
Drugs are bad and you know its true
but people don’t stop!!!
so people get addicted and they CAN’T stop!!!
Don’t you think your body needs more respect?
Drugs can control you and turn you bad
it will make you steal and send you mad
aren’t you a bit too young to die?
Don’t you think your body needs more respect?
Say NO! every time no matter what
if your friends offer you some you’ll end up dead
go and live your life and have fun instead
don’t you think your body needs more respect?
Well done team Trim.
Don,’t smoke it’s not cool you’ll end up in hsopital
your heart keeps you moving
movign and grooving
your hair will fall out
your teeth will fall out
your lungs will turn black
don’t light a ciggie
it’s not a biggie.
I love all of team Trim’s raps! Well done! Might I just add, I think all of your rhyming words are fantastic: they are simply FANTASTIC! ๐
Dont smoke its not cool
you will end up in hospital
you teath will go yellow.
so dont be a fool
dont smoke at all
because if you do
you wont grow tall
your skin will look old
and your get wrinkles too
so put out that ciggy
and dont be a fool
and your look cool
DRUGS ARE NASTY,DRUGS ARE BAD.
EVEN JUST A BIT WILL MAKE YO MAMMA SAD.
THEY MAKE YOU STUPID CUZ IT MESSES WITH YO BRAIN.
THINK YO UGLY NOW,DON’T EVEN COMPLAIN.
IT’S FACT,IF YOU DO DRUGS YOU WILL DIE.
THAT IS SAD AND WOULD MAKE PEOPLE CRY.
Wow! All of your raps look great! I especially like Brooke’s.
Great raps Hawkhill!
That inspired me to be a better learner and remember TYPING IS WRITING.