Team Trim – Writing of the Week

Congratulations to Lauren! A truly excellent play script. I really like the way you have included stage directions in brackets and remembered to try and add complex sentences, too.

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7 Responses to Team Trim – Writing of the Week

  1. Lewis T says:

    Wow, amazing. What level did you get?

  2. Emily A says:

    Well Lauren that is one great piece of writing and brilliant handriting well done.

  3. Katy M says:

    Well done Lauren this is amazing I can see you worked really hard!:)

  4. Kerry O says:

    Well done Lauran. After reading it, I wish my writing was like this!!!!!!!!!!!

  5. Libby J says:

    WOW! This is breath taking writing! You should be so proud Lauren for producing such amazing writing! Keep up the good work in time for our SATS!

  6. Jessica B says:

    WOW! That is an amazing playscript Lauren, well done!:-)

  7. Isabelle H says:

    WOW what an amazing picse of work you used some amamzing words and only one week to SATS and all the year sixes will do AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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