Team Trim/Thomas – Dragon Writers of the Week

This week, we were writing non-chronological reports about an invention. We tested out a robot and then wrote a report to the company to say what we liked, what we disliked and how the toy could be improved.

Our star writers this week were…Jasmine and Louis. A huge well done to both of you for finding different ways of saying ‘I liked’ and ‘I disliked’ as well as using ‘because’ to explain your thoughts. Well done!

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4 Responses to Team Trim/Thomas – Dragon Writers of the Week

  1. Alice C says:

    FANTASTIC! We are sure you are all VERY proud!!
    It is the BEST thing that has ever happened to you, I’m sure!!

    WELL DONE!!!:)

    Alice and Stephanie!! 🙂

  2. Alexandra S says:

    Well done! This is such a good price of writing you should feel really proud of yourself.

  3. Aaron S says:

    Well done Louis and Jasmine i am really impressed with your writing when I read it!

  4. W Oliver says:

    A FANTASTIC pice of writing keep up the great work 😉 🙂 😉

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