Team Wilverley’s Dragon Writer of the week.

Well done Jasmine. You have had another great week of writing.

This is a level 4 because you have given really clear paragraphs with a variety of sentence starters.

You used parenthetical commas in your introduction and great connectives.

Keep up the good work!

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5 Responses to Team Wilverley’s Dragon Writer of the week.

  1. Mr Croutear says:

    Well done Jasmine! It’s wonderful to hear that you had a great week of writing and topped it all off with this fantastic Big Write!

  2. Louis R says:

    Wow good bit of writing Jasmine well done 🙂

  3. Ella D says:

    Well done Jasmine . Keep up the good work in year5 well done for using parthetical commas and a vaitery of sentance oppners.

  4. Isabelle H says:

    WOW well done Jasmine for doing a great piese of writing. Keep up the amazing work because in yer six you will need it for SATS.

  5. Jasmine P says:

    Thank you for the lovely posts I will have fun with my Wii Token

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