Team Cazneaux Dragon Writers of the Week

This week, the children in the Upper Juniors were writing instructions for a night guard at an art museum. However, it wasn’t any ordinary museum, because at night, the various art work comes to life! They had to write detailed instructions and include warnings.

I have been greedy again and have selected two dragon writers. Both Sam and Megan tried particularly hard with this task and achieved PBs and I couldn’t choose between them!

Sam had worked hard on following his mind map and organising his writing so that his paragraphs were detailed and his points were well explained. He also took the time to think carefully about the vocabulary he used.

Megan included lots of quirky details into her writing, including clearly explaining that the wrench buffalo must be fed at precisely 6pm.  Furthermore, she carefully thought about warnings to make her writing more in depth.

Well done.

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20 Responses to Team Cazneaux Dragon Writers of the Week

  1. Emily H says:

    Well done

  2. Emily H says:

    Well done sam i love how you’ve used a colon to show a list.

  3. Freya S says:

    I like your use of time conetives Megan! Well Done! Moreover, I like your use of adverbs Sam! Well Done!

  4. Rosie H says:

    wow great writing you two!

  5. G Chloe says:

    Meagan great use of a colon.Sam well done for using a verb.

  6. Ella D says:

    Well done Megan i have just read your work its exellent well done for using instructions opners.

  7. Samuel S says:

    welldone Megan

  8. Paige S says:

    Your writting is so good !Well done!

  9. Tarka A says:

    Your work is amazing i wish i could write like you!

  10. Luke G says:


  11. Luke G says:

    You should be proud of your selfes!

  12. Alice C says:


    Megan and Sam, I am dumbstrucked!!
    Sam, I love your colon list and Megan, I LOVE your warnings: they give a dark aptmosphere. I am sure that the night guard is sure to feed the Wrench Buffalo at precisely 6pm!!

    Keep up the fantastic work and you should be very proud of yourselves for achieving a P.B!!


  13. Lexie N says:

    Well done! An amazing piece of writing! Keep the good work up!

  14. Liam H says:

    Well Done! A PB for both of you. Sam you used amazing warnings like ‘make sure you have ear plugs when you…’ and well done to Megan for showing of your Time Connectives. Make sure you keep up the good work!!

  15. Dayna S says:

    PBs for both of you and your writings on the blog! what a pride to have the whole world to see your ANAZING writing! well done.

  16. W Oliver says:

    Congratulations Megan and Sam. An incredible pice of writing! You should be really prou of your selves for achiving your P.B!!!!!!! 🙂

  17. Jasmine L says:

    Well done Megan and Sam your peices of work are absolutely amazing. Congratulations on achieving your PB and earning writer of the week!

  18. Alexander C says:

    Well done for geting a PB and a dragon point! Megan M. 🙂

  19. Katie W says:

    WOW guys! Your writing is amazing! Megan and Sam that writing is amazing that quality is amazing! I am only year 4 so when I go into year 5 I’ve got a few ideas of what quantity I need to write at !

    WELL DONE!!!!!!:-) 🙂 🙂

  20. Katie W says:

    Well done! 🙂

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