This week, we were writing a story about a ‘Crazy Inventor Competition’.
Congratulations to Jack for being my star writer this week! A huge well done for using prepositions and powerful verbs in your story. Jack also used ‘which’ to extend a sentence WHICH was fantastic 🙂
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Wow, Jack! What a great Big Write! You have really done well with your speech punctuation here: this is something which is very difficult to do. Congratulations on being your team’s Dragon Writer of the week.
Wow! Great work Jack you really used speech well and used a good use of which I am really glad that you got dragon writer because with that piece of work you should!!!
WELL DONE JACK!!!
well done jack
I loved this pice of writting.Ceep up all of this great work.
Well done Jack great writing.
Well done Jack keep up the good work. Well done for using speech correctly and putting action after. Also well done for putting puncuation .
Super well done Jack that piece of writing was absolutely amazing it blew me away(not litrally).
Super Work Jack!!!
The first thing that really impressed me was the powerful verbs and the subordinate clause.
I am really impressed you included a adjective to describe the garden pond in your first line.
Keep up the fantastic work Jack!!
Alice (a VERY impressed Yr 6 pupil)
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jack your writing is amazing and thats what has earned you dragon writer of the week WHICH is one of the best writing archive-ments you can get! congradulations!!!!!!!
Well done Jack for using ‘which’ and getting a PB! Just like what Miss Cooper said :
‘which ‘ is fantastic!
Wow!! Jack your writting is amazing. Well done for acheiving for your PB and I bet you are extremly proud of your writting. Well done Jack!
Lily says well done best writing that looks like level 4.
Wow Jack i love your writing looking foward to reading another piece of your writing on the blog. Well done.
Well done for using which and lots of other spectacular words!