Team Miss Cooper- Dragon Writer of the Week!

This week, we were writing a story about a ‘Crazy Inventor Competition’.

Congratulations to Jack for being my star writer this week! A huge well done for using prepositions and powerful verbs in your story. Jack also used ‘which’ to extend a sentence WHICH was fantastic 🙂

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14 Responses to Team Miss Cooper- Dragon Writer of the Week!

  1. Miss Cazneaux says:

    Wow, Jack! What a great Big Write! You have really done well with your speech punctuation here: this is something which is very difficult to do. Congratulations on being your team’s Dragon Writer of the week.

  2. Katie W says:

    Wow! Great work Jack you really used speech well and used a good use of which I am really glad that you got dragon writer because with that piece of work you should!!!
    WELL DONE JACK!!!

  3. Kyle B says:

    well done jack

  4. G Chloe says:

    I loved this pice of writting.Ceep up all of this great work.

  5. Emily A says:

    Well done Jack great writing.

  6. Ella D says:

    Well done Jack keep up the good work. Well done for using speech correctly and putting action after. Also well done for putting puncuation .

  7. Emily A says:

    Super well done Jack that piece of writing was absolutely amazing it blew me away(not litrally).

  8. Alice C says:

    Super Work Jack!!!

    The first thing that really impressed me was the powerful verbs and the subordinate clause.

    I am really impressed you included a adjective to describe the garden pond in your first line.

    Keep up the fantastic work Jack!!

    Alice (a VERY impressed Yr 6 pupil)

  9. Dayna S says:

    wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jack your writing is amazing and thats what has earned you dragon writer of the week WHICH is one of the best writing archive-ments you can get! congradulations!!!!!!!

  10. Paige S says:

    Well done Jack for using ‘which’ and getting a PB! Just like what Miss Cooper said :
    ‘which ‘ is fantastic!

  11. Jasmine L says:

    Wow!! Jack your writting is amazing. Well done for acheiving for your PB and I bet you are extremly proud of your writting. Well done Jack!

  12. Lily D says:

    Lily says well done best writing that looks like level 4.

  13. Lexie N says:

    Wow Jack i love your writing looking foward to reading another piece of your writing on the blog. Well done.

  14. Mason S says:

    Well done for using which and lots of other spectacular words!

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