Last week, the Upper Juniors started their new topic ‘Global Swap Shop’. They began their learning thinking about child labour and all had to write an argument on whether or not child labour should be made illegal across the globe.
Andrew is my Dragon Writer this week because he really put a lot of effort into his Big Write. He listened carefully to instructions and evidenced key ideas in his writing, including: argument vocabulary (quite clearly) and the use of statistics. This Big Write was definitely a PB for Andrew this year. Well done.
When you’re commenting about Andrew’s work, you might like to think about the following questions:
Which phrase or sentence really made you agree with Andrew that child labour should be banned?
Were there any words which you are going to ‘magpie’ in your writing to help you get a PB?