This week, the Lower Juniors were set the task of evaluating a toy they received for Christmas.
Congratulations to James, Eve and Tara who are my Dragon Writers of the Week!
They all used challenging vocabulary along with consequential connectives in their reports which helped them to put across their strong points of view.
Well done! You are star writers! Keep it up!
Miss Cooper
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WOW well done keep up the good work love to see another piece of your writing on the blog again.
James,Eva and Tara… BRILLIANT WORK!!
Firstly, well done for being Miss Cooper’s star writer of the week!!
Also, well done for trying to use consiquental connectives and a wide variety of interesting vocabulary. Furthermore, it is clear you used the PEE stratergy (Point, explain, example).
Keep up the brilliant work you three!! 🙂
Wow! I am blown away about how stunning your writing is! I think I’m gonna have to take tips from you guys! Congratulations Eve, James and Tara!
Well done Eve, James and Tara!
Your work is exellent, I like your describing words.
You must of tryed really hard!
CONGRATULATIONS!your work is great.I think you really deserved dragon writer of the week because you have used lots of interesting volcabulary and lots of verbs
Amazing James,Tara and Eve amazing work and superb handwriting well done you must be so proud of yourself brilliant.
WOW! I was amazed whith James,Eve’s and Tara’s work.Keep up the great work!
WOW! I was blown away with James,Eve’s and Tara’s big write. You should be so proud of yourself! Keep up the great work!!
James,Eve & Tara.
Well Done! Super writing keep it up!
If you try hard you will get on the Hordle Blogger again! Come On! Have you read
your writing?
Keep writing!
WELL DONE!!!!!!!amazing work i loved the use of conectives. keep up the good work!how did you write such good quality work!!!!!
Well done team for getting your work up on the blog. Looking forward to seeing it up on the blog again sometime!
well done for getting that great peace of work up on the blog you must have tryed realy hard 🙂