Last week, the Upper Juniors became sport shoe critics and, as part of their Big Write, reviewed their very own trainers commenting on what they liked, disliked and how the footwear could be improved.
This week, Megan S is the Dragon Writer for Team Caz because of her well thought out, detailed review of the ‘Nike Airsoft’ trainer. She thought that the limited edition shoes were super stylish but was not impressed that they rubbed her ankles. I was impressed with Megan’s Big Write because she took the time to include adjectives in her writing to help the reader to really imagine the shoe she was reviewing. Well done, Megan.
If you had to review your own trainers, what would you say?
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Wow! That Big Write is amazing! I loved the use of all of your super adjectives! Did it take a lot of thought when planning?
Well done Megan! A super Big Write this week. I really liked the way you included real-life examples of your experiences with the trainers (the bandage) and you used a great ‘due to the fact’ sentence!
Well done Megan!A great Big Write.Great use of inserting adjectives i would love to read another piece of your writing.
WOW Megan! Congratulations on achieving a PB and a Dragon Point for your team!
I loved your super real-life examples (the injury) due to the fact they added real realism to your Big Write. In addition, I adored your ‘due to the fact’ sentence very much! I also extremely liked your superb adjectives which made your writing really stand out.
I can certainly see why Miss C picked you as a Dragon Writer Of The Week; you made an amazing effort!
Well done on getting your writing on the Blog and I really look forward to reading some more of your writing!
Well done Megan,i bet you are so pleased with your self,great use of adjectives and better sentence openers.
Wow, I’m really amazed at all of this, and really impressed too!
It is so amazing that you are so good at English!!
Every thing you have learnt will be worth while and I am sure youyr parents and teachers are all very proud.
All the work will benefit and help you with every thing in life. Also, well don Megan, you should be very proud!!!!