Team Caz – Dragon Write of the Week!

Last week, Corah wowed the Upper Juniors with her incredible review of a new pair of trainers! She critiqued the shoes and wrote about how they could be improved. I was particularly impressed with the examples she gave and the range of synonyms for trainers.

What do you think of Corah’s review?

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3 Responses to Team Caz – Dragon Write of the Week!

  1. Rachel F. says:

    WOW! what a amazing report on trainers. I really enjoyed the paragraph on !comfort!
    overall it was really interesting to read. WELL DONE CORAH!

  2. Ethan.B says:

    Wow Corah what an amazing peace of writing I thought it was the best I’ve ever seen and I really liked the paragraph on comfort and durability. And I think you should be very proud of yourself for doing an amazing peace of description and amazing vocab!!
    Keep up the good work.

  3. Imogen C says:

    It was amazing! Keep up the good work!

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