Team Cooper Dragon Writer of the Week

This week, in our Big Write lesson, we watched a short film called ‘The Lighthouse’ we had to think about how the man in the lighthouse would feel and Team Cooper told the story of the light going off, from the Lighthouse Keeper’s point of view.

Enjoy reading Jack’s piece, he has been a risk taker with his vocabulary choices! My favourite line is ‘As the light began to dim, so did their voices…’ very intriguing! Well done Jack- you are a super star.

Miss Cooper :)

 

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3 Responses to Team Cooper Dragon Writer of the Week

  1. Imogen C says:

    Well Done Jack for your amazing work- I read it and I am totally inspired to try something like that myself in English! Keep the good work up Team Hazel1 :)

  2. Alice says:

    I love the communication between the lowering of the voices and the light. Great work :D

  3. Julia P says:

    Great work, Jack! I really liked doing this Big Write!

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