This week, for our exciting Big Write, we had the opportunity to write all about our fantastic school trip.
The children worked so hard and all achieved PB’s (personal bests) for their use of adverbs and complex sentences. I was blown away by the amount of children who showed off their SPAG skills, with the use of semi-colons and drop in clauses.
Two children stood out as taking risks and experimenting with new techniques. Congratulations Toby and Amelie, you are star writers.
I wonder who will be my dragon writers next week…
Miss Cooper.
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Well done Amelie and Toby! I would never be able to produce a piece of work like that!!! ( unless I have my brain switched on!!??)
Well Done! I hope you had a lot of fun at the Dockyard, because I certainly did 😀
Wow!That is a amazing piece of work from Amelie.I certainly couldn’t have written a piece of work like that!!
WOW! Amelie and Toby I would never be able to produce work like that. In addition it nice to see you enjoyed the dockyard because I definitely did. Plus I fell asleep on the coach. lol 🙂