Over the last few weeks, the Lower Juniors have been learning to use preposition openers and super speech in their writing. Last week, the children got the opportunity to write about a very exciting homework task where Josh, a little boy, had to create an invention for a school competition. All the children came up with some great invention ideas from carpet cleaning robots to metal detectors and wrote some fantastic stories, several of which I am delighted to say were PBs! All Team Phillips should feel very proud.
After much deliberation, I have chosen to make Claudia and George my Dragon Writers as they both thought carefully about their writing and produced their Personal Best. Congratulations!
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Well done George and Claudia your writing is absolutely amazing and I bet you are very proud of it too!
Well done , I really enjoyed reading your work , it’s great !
Well done(excelent) you got a PB
Well done George your first pearsonal best.Keep up the good work all through the year. Claudia you did a personal best well done keep up the good work to .
Wow this is amazing pece of description and well done for getting your pursanal best
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Claudia I love the way you use a colon ( : ) great work!!!!
WOW well done Claudia and Geroge you have done some fablous work. Futhermore well done for achieving your PB. Lets hope you do as best as last time. Keep up the good work.
WOW! A PB! GO BOTH OF YOU AND KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP!!!!!!!!
I was proud the first time I got a PB and star writer so you should be to!!!!!!
If you guys carry on doing amazing work like this, you will defenetly pass your sats!!!!!
Well done for being risktakers and trying new openers.
WOW! What great work you both have done.Well done for getting PB’s. You should be so proud of yourselves! Keep up the good work!
Well done I really loved your work keep it up lower juniors! 🙂
Well done Cludia I loved your great discription, speech and adjectives. Futhermore you got many yellow highlighted parts and Capital letters correct. I can’t think of anything to inprove it, it’s just to good. 🙂
WOW! I think there are too many P.B’s on the blog for me to count!! I loved both of your sentence openers and your prepositon starts are brilliant! You both should be so proud of youselves and I hope you continue your outstanding work!
Alice! 🙂
Well done that is some great work!
WOW and congratulations. 🙂
WOW I enjoyed your work it was amazing I cant belive how much effort you put into your writing!Congratulation to you!:)
Well done Claudia that was an amazing piece of work. Some day you’ll beat the year 4s and George you didn’t write like that in year 3.
Wow those pieces of work are amazing!.
Fab!Well done!Good work and bravo fantastic writting.
Wow George and Claudia your writing is fantastic.
WOW!!!!!!! Amazing piece of writing George and claude. A PB you should be well proud.
Keep up the fanstiac work!
Wow! I agree with Alice c there are too many PB’s on the blog! I really enjoyed reading both your work! I think you have both worked very hard! You should be very proud of your selfs. I think you put lots of effort into your writing! Keep it up 🙂
Well done George and of course Claudia! You must have tried your hardest to acheive a dragon writer of the week!!!
Wow great work I enjoyed reading it! Fabulous work George and Claudia you deserve to be dragon writter.Congratulations to you!!!!!
I love both of your pieces of writing . You used a wide range of adjectives.
Amazing!!!
I loved our trip to the art gallery it was amazing and realy cool.