On Monday,the Lower Juniors visited Beaulieu Motor Museum as part of their Victorian Day. We got to meet Dorothy Levitt, a female racing driver, and Miss Clarke, a governess at Palace House. We had a fabulous day and have written to the Grand Hordles to tell them all about our visit. Throughout our writing, we focused on using time connectives and powerful verbs.
Congratulations to Tom and Jessica who are our Dragon Writers this week. They both used a wide range of time connectives to structure their writing and thought about their word choice. What do you like most about their writing?
Mrs Phillips
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Wow!! What brilliant pieces of writing you have produced!
I love both of your wide variety of time connectives and your superb word choices!
Well done to both of you! Furthermore, you should be VERY proud of yourself!! 🙂
Alice!! 🙂
Well done Tom and Jessica , you must be really proud of yourselfs for getting a PB!
Both of your pieces of writing are amazing, your time connectives are amazing! I know that I couldn’t have done anything like that when I was your age!
Well done Tom and Jess very neat handwriting i think that was your PB you should be so proud of yourself.
Wow Tom! You have produced an amazing piece of writing! You used adjectives and time connectives extremely well! I am impressed! 🙂
Well done Jessica! Whilst I was observing your fantsastic piece of writing,( as detailed as Tom’s) I spotted some brackets,exclamation marks and other shocking punctuation marks! You have shown a brilliant piece of writing!
Well done Tom and Jessica! Both brilliant pieces of writing I couldn’t possible chose my favroite part. However, I did like Jessica’s time conectives and Tom’s word choices! You both sould be very, very proud of yourselfs!
Congratulations Tom and Jessica! You have produced two pieces of amazing writing. Wordsworth is going to enjoy thoes pieces of work. You should be so proud of yourselfs for achiving your P.Bs! Keep up the hard work. 🙂 😉
Well done Tom and Jessica I remember going their it was awsome due to the fact well done for using a viarty of connectives to scructure your work and thought about your word choice.
I am amazed at the piece of writing you have done , well done for using connectives and adjectives !!!
WOW an amazing piece of writing both of you should be proud of your self .Well done
Wow, a great piece of writing you should give your self a thumbs up;). Well done. Did you enjoy doing your work?