Wilverley Dragon Writer of the Week (Number Two)

Well done Sean for reflecting on previous comments to improve his writing!

Using more stage directions has increased his level and made the playscript more interesting to read. By choosing thoughtful questions and responses, I have learnt a great deal about the Ice Hockey player.

Keep remembering to add the extra details because this makes reading it very enjoyable.

Another PB!

Miss Aslett

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4 Responses to Wilverley Dragon Writer of the Week (Number Two)

  1. Alice C says:

    Amazing work Sean!
    I love your stage directions due to the fact you even included adverbs to make your playscript/interview more enjoyable to read!
    Also, I hope you’re very proud of yourself that you got a PB and a Dragon Point for your Team! :)

  2. Emily A says:

    Wow Sean love the stage directions you have used in your amazing handwriting/work.

  3. Harry B says:

    Well done Sean for a great piece of writting!!!

  4. Jodie M says:

    WELL DONE :)

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